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The Christmas Party

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It was Christmas time in Wonkaville, and the town was a buzz. Tomorrow was the big day for Mr. Wonka's big Christmas party. This wasn't just a regular Christmas party, mind you. Mr. Wonka was renowned for his Christmas parties. Every year, Wonka would invite the town’s people to his factory for a wonderful night of dancing, schmoozing, and some merry Christmas revelry. But little did one certain party goer know it; it would be a night she would never forget.

"Mom, none of my dresses fit me!" exclaimed Carrie. "Keep looking Carrie, you've got to have something that fits!" came her mother's reply from downstairs.
Carrie was a bright, caring, 16 year old girl with a future ahead of her. She was a 5' 9" brunette and a little skinny. She wasn't too skinny, but all her dresses wouldn't fit her anymore. Wow, I have nothing here to wear thought Carrie to her self .But, after 10 more minutes of searching, she managed to find a dazzling sliver dress that fit her perfectly.

Carrie walked downstairs, to fid her mom waiting for her. "Finally, the beauty queen decides to grace us with her presence," remarked her mom sarcastically. "Mom, lay off," replied Carrie, in a somewhat angry tone.

Luckily, Carrie's house was no more then a five minute drive from the factory, and it wasn't long before Carrie and her mother arrived. Carrie and her mother walked up to the door, and with a large push, managed to open the gigantic doors. Once Carrie stepped inside, she was taken aback. In the center of the room was a huge Christmas tree.
It must be at least 50 feet tall remarked Carrie to herself. Not only was it huge, it was pretty as well. The tree was covered from top to bottom in all sorts of curious ornaments.
It had everything from garland, to some fruit shaped ornaments, to candy.

It even had candy canes adorning every branch. Carrie was a sucker for candy canes. She had tried almost every flavor there was out there. Carrie noticed some blue and white striped candy canes. Knowing Mr. Wonka and his new candies always coming out, she had to try one.

After saying her hellos to all her friends and family attending the party, she slowly moved her way to the tree. She began looking for the one closest blue one to her, until she eyed the do not touch sign anchored at the bottom of the tree. She took a quick look around, and began reaching out to grab one. She heard a familiar, quirky voice behind her ask "You weren't about to take anything off my Christmas tree, where you?"

She quickly turned around and replied "no Mr. Wonka, I was just about to fix an oddly placed ornament!" "Oh, that’s good, because some of the candies you see on that tree haven't been tested yet," remarked Mr. Wonka. Now Carrie really wanted that candy cane. Not many people knew it, but Carrie was a naturally curious person. "Oh, I didn't know that Mr. Wonka" said Carrie in an unnaturally courteous reply. Mr. Wonka then walked off to speak to the town mayor.

Carrie took a good look around her, and made sure no one was watching her.
Carrie quickly grabbed the closest blue and white candy cane and ran off to the women’s restroom. She quickly ran into the bathroom and went in the nearest unoccupied stall.
"Time to enjoy the fruits of my labor," whispered Carrie to herself in a somewhat greedy tone.

She unwrapped the candy cane and stuck it greedily in her mouth. Wow, thought Carrie as she began sucking on it, this is pretty good. I've never had a blueberry candy cane before, and this is really tasty! Carrie was to engrossed in the wonderful taste of the candy cane to notice her skin slowly turn dark blue.

While she was sucking on her candy cane sucking, Carrie began to notice tightness in her dress. It isn't that time of the month she said to her self while she looked down. Carrie couldn't believe what she was seeing! Her stomach was beginning to bulge out! As her stomach began getting bigger, the tightness began getting more painful.
But Carrie was too engrossed in her candy cane to think clearly. As she was struggling with what to do, her dress began to tear.

Carrie then snapped to her senses. I have got to get out of here she thought to her self. She was about to open the lock on the stall door, when she realized that her skin was blue. I'm turning into a blueberry! So she opened the door and bolted to the bathroom door. Well, she bolted as fast as she could feeling 7 months pregnant with triplets.

She opened the door to realize that she was still growing! She took a second to look for Mr. Wonka. She spotted him all the way at the other end of the room, talking to her mother of all people. So Carrie began half running, half walking to Mr. Wonka. After all, it became harder and harder to walk the faster as time went by.

Carrie had just started moving closer to Mr. Wonka, when riiiiiip. Her dress, having been strained by Carries ever increasing girth just couldn't contain her anymore.
No, unluckily for Carrie, the room where the party was rather large and rather packed, so it wasn't long before someone saw a growing blue girl in her bra and underwear trying to run across the room.

The only thing on Carrie's mind was get to Mr. Wonka, but it was getting harder to walk and strangers began crowding around her. Carrie no looked like she was 3 months overdue with quintuplets, and her breasts were as big as basketballs. She began attempting to push the crowd out of her way, but her arms were slowly being absorbed by her increasing girth.

It wasn't long before Carrie's momentum caught up with her. Her body just couldn't support running on all that weight anymore, so Carrie tripped. Talk about embarrassment. She could hear the whispers of everyone around her, as well as feel the eyes of all the party goers staring at her. It was useless now. She couldn't move. Her arms and legs were gone. The most movement she could now do was flap her hands and feet. And so she cried, and cried, and cried.
After she had a good crying fit, she noticed a slightly angry looking Mr. Wonka standing over her. "I told you those candies weren't tested yet," said Wonka in an accusatory tone."Yes sir, I know," replied Carrie in a whimper, blue tears still streaming down her sheeks. "Oh well, looks like someone needs a squeezing," said Wonka with a sigh. He pulled out a small whistle, sounded it, and out of one of the doors came 4 OompaLoompas. "Take her to the squeezing room," said Wonka to the lead one. "Yes Boss" replied the OmmpaLoompa.

The Ommpas gathered on all sides of Carrie, and began to roll her to the squeezing room. "Watch where you are putting that hand! That tickles!" screamed Carrie to one of the Oompas. After a few minutes, they had arrived to the squeezing room. With great difficulty, the Oompas had managed to load Carrie onto the Crane. She was hoisted up, and placed in between to large, bowed metal plates. “Oh great," said the rotund Carrie as the plates began their job.

Carrie's life was never the same again. Her skin stayed blue, no matter what Plastic Surgeon she visited. She was always picked on at school. Avery month, Carrie had to go back to the factory for another juicing, for the inflation was never stoped, but only slowed down.

The end, or is it?
Wow, another blueberry story? I never thought I'd be writing stories like that. Anyways, I kinda like it, but I wanna know what you guys think! I need critiquing so I can get better at this!
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I want that candy!!!!